To start I just want to mention how much of a intellectual
labyrinth I found Joan Scott’s article to be. There were sections that I had to
read two or three times and I’m still not sure I fully understand what she was
attempting to get across. In that regard, Meyerowitz’s interpretation of Scott
and Ditz really helped me solidify my understanding, to an extent, of the
subject at hand.
Before even reading this week’s prompt, I continually came
back to Meyerowitz when she asks “When (and how)…did the language of gender
crucially structure experience and actually influence behavior and
decision-making, and when did it simply add a convenient rhetorical flourish or
embellish with a hollow cliché? When…did the language of gender constitute
other relations of power, and when was it just a minor paragraph of a
supplemental example within the narratives of social and political
order?” (1351) Ditz may have had this question in mind when writing
her article, however after completing it I found myself fairly disappointed. I
feel like she brings up wonderful points about gender/masculinity and its
function in society. Her points made things come together and broaden my
perception of what gender history really means. However, I found her use of
primary sources and evidence to be quite lacking.
To start, I wish Ditz would have gone deeper in exploring
the 18th century context of the phrases she analyzes. She treads a
careful line between literary analysis and contextualization. I feel like she
is juggling the two and ends up fumbling. Several times she brings up examples
of how masculinity was defined and internalized amongst the Philadelphian
merchants. In doing so, on many occasions, I found the evidence she provides
didn’t set a strong basis for her argument. So when she then goes off exploring
the meaning in relation to gender, it easily comes off as conjecture. She cites
Robert Bisset “must apply somewhere to raise Money in order to prevent a
disgrace happening to the yet unsullied Credit of (the House)” (67) and claims
this to be evidence of evoking ideas of chastity/purity/public opinion that I
found to not be substantiated by the quote itself. As I continued reading I
found this to be the case more and more. The one that sticks out in my mind is when
Ditz cites a shipwreck as this contention between masculinity and nature. (76)
Though, from what I saw, there were several gendered aspects of what Drinker
wrote, Ditz goes into a hyper analysis on how it represents child birth, rape, miscarriage,
and deep symbolism that seemed almost fabricated.
I think there are several problems with Ditz’s article that
I would like to offer suggestions for. First and foremost, she needs to broaden
her source material. I haven’t done a scathing review of all her footnotes, but
the in-text evidence she provides stem from very few sources. Bisset is cited
for nearly half the paper. I understand when there are limitations to the
textual sources available, but I find her confinement to just a couple
individuals to represent an entire city, nation, language, time period, to be a
massive oversight. I think Ditz should have also contextualized the 18th
century definition of words. Perhaps our modern notions mask the gendered
roots. A great example is when she states “the use of ‘ruin’ – a term with
strong sexual and moral overtones” (66) and I want to ask “alright, how so?
Please explain.” To be fair, she does a great job with the term “friend” in
contextualizing the 18th century connotation. I just wish she had
done more of that to help solidify her literary base of evidence.
I regret spending such a long time lambasting parts of Ditz’s
work. I do think she is on the right track and many of her points I found
intriguing/compelling and I don’t think she is technically wrong. I just feel
she could have done a much better job making her case. Meyerowtiz’s short
article does a wonderful job in reviewing the groundwork for gender history and
pulling together Scott and Ditz. I feel as if I had read Meyerwitz before
reading Scott, I could have gathered more from Scott’s articles. Her use of
philosophical and sociological framework seemed very impressive yet very
confusing. I am still not quite sure I understand what structuralism and
post-structuralism means. She does a wonderful job illustrating the different
schools of thought and defining her notion of gender as not something that can
be studying in seclusion. This is why, in Scott’s view, Women’s history is
troublesome. Not only is the term gender more politically neutral, it illustrates
the relationship between masculinity and femininity. Scott shows how that
relationship is key to understanding gender. From what I gathered her article
seems to stand the test of time because her work stands as a voice for the
beginning. It demands that historians look further and legitimize gender
history and is obviously one of the greatest motivators for the movement.
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